EricJAdams Posted May 11, 2025 Posted May 11, 2025 https://flat.io/score/67feddeed57dfb7d4dcc8158-migraine Quote
ironlips Posted May 21, 2025 Posted May 21, 2025 OK, Eric. That's a good first shot, probably more coherent than the first thing I ever wrote. I will pass on the advice my mentor gave me: "Your pencil has two ends. Try using the eraser and take out about half the notes." I was a bit taken aback and asked, "Well,which ones should I take out?". He replied, "Any ones that don't absolutely, positively have to be there." It was the best compositional advice I ever got. Keep writing, and use both (virtual) ends. Quote
ranintothedoor Posted July 25, 2025 Posted July 25, 2025 Nice job! First half was enjoyable. The second half was a little ram-y for rams' sake (imo). Super fun, though. I'd say the level overall might be grade 3+ just based on the BD part independence (it would take a decent HS DL several rehearsals to get it serviceable). Keep writing!! Quote
Percussion827 Posted August 9, 2025 Posted August 9, 2025 Not bad, overall. I'd give it a Grade 3. Last part was ramrod for ramrod's sake, following what ranintothedoor said. Starting at measure 22, I would drop the 6's to standard 16th note runs, mainly to save the hands and heads of the kids, piggybacking on what ironlips said. Good attempt. Quote
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