jivey2002 Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 (edited) Gone... setting up a website to read my reviews... Edited June 30, 2004 by jivey2002 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pags Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 Well, that was....one opinion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pags Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 (edited) Sorry, ended up being a double-post Edited June 25, 2004 by pags Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjeffeory Posted June 25, 2004 Share Posted June 25, 2004 (edited) No offense, but you kept using the word "they're" incorrectly. "They're" is a contraction, two words rolled into on. They are... "Their" is posessive. "Their show this night was flat." "not much I can say but I did enjoy their show".... This is the use you wanted. Then there is: "there". As in Let's go over "there". Thanks for the review and all. It's okay to rip on people and be disappointed and all of that. Afterall it is your money. At least do it with decent grammar. It makes you look more intelligent and more credible... :) Off to Louisville.... Yes, I'm going "they're"... ^0^ Edited June 25, 2004 by jjeffeory Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jivey2002 Posted June 25, 2004 Author Share Posted June 25, 2004 i didn't want to write the review in the first place... but anywho... after marching and doing a lot of performance stuff I always look at whats wrong and needs to be improved...I have a hard time looking at "ok this was good" ... my friends give me crap about it too... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoothy Posted June 29, 2004 Share Posted June 29, 2004 Thanks for the review. Mankato is our second home show and performing there is always a joy (one of the best drum corps stadiums in the world) And whether or not you know how to use proper English (f___ing grammar police), your courage to post how you feel about a show is well appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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